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i like it personally im more into poems dat hve rhymes n such, sounds more lke music to me. dats da poems i write but i rlly lke urs. i know da feeling of being restrained and just wanting 2 be free, hving no control but dont wrry ur time will come when u finally get 2 live wildly lke u want. keep up with da poems, it is a great way 2 express urself. goodluck and stay real, peace :)